Time Line: Composition development

Stair composition 1: I do not like this composition as you cant see each emotion clearly. The idea was that the extremity of the emotion would be directly related to how high it sat on the stair case. However, looking at the image I can see that it is visually weak.

Time Line: Idea development

This image is of my developed idea, using location as a tool to make each piece more visually engaging. I have used a cardboard structure to insinuate Ravensbourne, turning the windows into eyes that stare down at my. In the corner a very minimalist mound suggest the presence of O2.

Time Line: Initial Idea

These are two examples of my initial idea. The first image is supposed to represent feelings of confusion and moderate feelings of solitude. However, I left a lot of negative space predominantly to comment on the open space I found myself located in when entering Ravensbourne.
The second image demonstrates a day full of movement, travelling and a variety of emotional levels. I feel as though these two pieces are only vaguely effective, maybe because they are very minimalist and I would prefer to create something with more to look at. In my final timeline I have made references to the location of each emotion felt.

Time Line: Idea Development

These two images are pages in my sketch book that show my process of thought for my initial idea of a time line that illustrates changes in my emotional state throughout the past week. Here I have decided to make 3D abstract pieces, which are situated inside comic book-like frames to show a change through a series of works.