Experimenting with frames: 5

This frame has turned the image into a minimalist piece, open for any interpretation. 

Time Line (Final idea)

Final composition: I felt this was the most visually pleasing image out of all of them. However, it would have been more affective if I used a different surface - other than carpet - such as, a larger sheet of white paper. This would direct the viewers attention more to the pieces rather than their surroundings. Overall, I wasn't too happy with the outcome of my final timeline. I believe the concept of it was good, but it didn't translate as well visually. Perhaps this is because of the way I chose to present it (in individual comic frames).

Time Line: Idea development

This image is of my developed idea, using location as a tool to make each piece more visually engaging. I have used a cardboard structure to insinuate Ravensbourne, turning the windows into eyes that stare down at my. In the corner a very minimalist mound suggest the presence of O2.

Time Line: Initial Idea

These are two examples of my initial idea. The first image is supposed to represent feelings of confusion and moderate feelings of solitude. However, I left a lot of negative space predominantly to comment on the open space I found myself located in when entering Ravensbourne.
The second image demonstrates a day full of movement, travelling and a variety of emotional levels. I feel as though these two pieces are only vaguely effective, maybe because they are very minimalist and I would prefer to create something with more to look at. In my final timeline I have made references to the location of each emotion felt.