Time Line: Initial Idea

These are two examples of my initial idea. The first image is supposed to represent feelings of confusion and moderate feelings of solitude. However, I left a lot of negative space predominantly to comment on the open space I found myself located in when entering Ravensbourne.
The second image demonstrates a day full of movement, travelling and a variety of emotional levels. I feel as though these two pieces are only vaguely effective, maybe because they are very minimalist and I would prefer to create something with more to look at. In my final timeline I have made references to the location of each emotion felt.